The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
A bittersweet story - a little girl that made it and many who did not. Nicely done
02/28/06
Sad. Well-written.
02/28/06
Very good. Watch your tense. We are in the present until the last paragraph and then "Macy’s mother sighed,"