The Official Writing Challenge
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It seems the topic of "winter" is bringing out a lot of our darker thoughts. A good one to ponder, however. Kudos!
11/22/05
I kinda like this, the way it progressed, the descriptive language until the break to second person, which seemed out of place.
11/24/05
I don't care what anybody else says...I loved it! It had perfect (or almost perfect flow) and it wasn't easy to write...it took time and talent. Three cheers!
11/25/05
I thought your poem was fairly smooth, well presented thoughts, and I liked the "winter of the soul". Although I am a happy winter person for the most part. I enjoyed your poem. God bless ya, littlelight
I enjoyed this and thought it had a great message. A little dark perhaps - is there no fruit at all that can survive winter's frost - but overall lovely poem with good rhyme and rhythm. Well done.
Kenn, I think this poem is absolutely beautiful! What a poignant message and so skillfully woven. You wrote it exactly as it should be. I still feel the chill after reading it. Bravo!
Nicely done Kenn. Beautiful words and a perfect title. A true blessing to read.