The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/05
A Biblical quote to begin leads the reader on, however, my opinion, break the stanzas into 8 verse lines, rethink some of the pace. I think there is something good starting here.
11/25/05
Most of the poem went along smoothly, and I thought you made some great points in it. God bless ya, littlelight