The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/14
What a well written story. You are a good story teller.

I liked the scenes you set and the messages they conveyed.

Thanks for sharing.
A fitting title and a story that fit the topic well. The conclusion tied it together in a satisfying way. Well done.
Heartwarming - and my favorite meal! Sweet . . .
01/27/14
Awww. What a lovely story! It brought back memories I had as a little girl. Mine was playing in the "snow" and the hot cocoa and chocolate cookies afterwards!

Loved it, great ending. Thanks for sharing.

God bless~