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This is a touching story that takes me through the sadness into the light again. A unique take on the topic too. Well done.
A very well-earthed picture of adjusting to grief, and how God uses so many different people in different ways to express his grace. And "Pansies at Your Door" - what a beautiful idea! I hope that it's not just for this story alone.
"Blessed are those who mourn for they shall be comforted..." jumped right out at me in this tender story. What a fabulous idea of the pansies at the door...I pray that this is an actual event, and if not, I am going to suggest it happen at our church!

Thank you for this story.

God bless~
Your story is gripping, moving and extremely well-written. It rings true to how some deal with grief. The ending is touching and uplifting. Well done!
Terrific characterization of your MC's avoidance antics.It was an enjoyable read and the ending was priceless.