The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/12
This was an interesting and different approach to the topic this week. Nicely done, I enjoyed it. Good ending. God bless~
12/19/12
Creative take on the topic. Thank you.
Wow this is such an intense piece. You do an amazing job of giving the reader a peek inside of the MC's brain. I've had death phobias and Rapture fears all of my life. They've definitely calmed over the years but every once in a while they creep back in. I've joked that I'm going to defy death and live forever and your words open my eyes a bit more on that. How awful to be separated from Jesus and those I love. There is a purpose behind all of this something only God fully understands. Your story has calmed me as I find myself getting caught up in the hustle and bustle of the Christmas to-do-lists. Thank you for pulling me outside of my self and opening my eyes in a new way. Your words were the perfect balm for my aching body, soul, and mind.