The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 464 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Poignant!
08/13/11
Wow - I don't know where to begin! That was so powerful and so true for so many individuals...I have known quite a few of them in my life. I loved the line "someday never came, but one day did" and the fact that the MC mother prayed continuously for the child's soul, and then she met Jesus and was saved. Insightful, and imaginative, and a profound commentary on many people today who sadly are not "saved." Loved it! Amen - God bless~
08/13/11
Wow - a really powerful piece of writing. Very stirring and challenging message.
08/15/11
Absolutely wonderful and powerful! Reminds me of Luke 12:19-20, except praise God, at least your MC got saved at the last minute! Great job!