The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/11
This was eerie and gripping with the weather setting the mood along with your crafted imagery. Kinda gave me goosebumps. Good job.
06/07/11
Great word pictures that capture and project the atmosphere of two contrasting events. Well done.
The imagery of these two contrasting scenes is at once both haunting and enchanting. I believe we have been introduced to Shiloh church in past entries -- looking forward to hearing more. Excellent job in creating these scenes and moving through to a sober ending