The Official Writing Challenge
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So much to love about this slice-of-life story. The tongue-in-cheek phrase, “a tune slightly reminiscent of something a munchkin might sing,” referencing perhaps “Ding dong, the witch is dead?” LOL! The MC on the phone with her man. Yum! And oo-oo-oo-oo! Superciliously! I’ve seen that look on someone I worked for. Wee “red ink”: I think you wanted ‘intact’ instead of ‘in tact’, if you meant unimpaired.

Great writing!
05/15/11
Enjoyed the language and tone of this. I was right there. Fun stuff!
05/19/11
Good writing. I felt sorry for the poor phone operator.