The Official Writing Challenge
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The ending didn't surprise me, but it certainly is a heartfelt description of our Lord's reaching out to all those He loves. A great take on the theme--quite outside the box.
Okay that was really creepy -- in a good way -- let me explain. First, the title, perhaps I'm in a literal mood but the words in the title felt like they were reaching for me. So I came in. And the piece, with the words, kept pulling me in with their reach. Having wasted over forty years of my life ignoring my Lord and Savior, I know exactly what this 'reaching' by Him feels like for when I finally noticed it I clearly understood what it was.

With all this blathering of mine I can't even begin to explain how strongly I connected to this piece.
What a beautiful love letter from Jesus.
Short and pointed straight to the heart. "Oh Love that will not let me go."
Short, but all was said that needed to be said. So beautiful. The 5th and 6th paragraphs are simply priceless.
Congratulations on placing 9th in your level!
Yep, that's how God thinks of us. I'm so glad he does. His love is overwhelming.

Congrats on placing! :)