The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/11
The ending didn't surprise me, but it certainly is a heartfelt description of our Lord's reaching out to all those He loves. A great take on the theme--quite outside the box.
05/13/11
Okay that was really creepy -- in a good way -- let me explain. First, the title, perhaps I'm in a literal mood but the words in the title felt like they were reaching for me. So I came in. And the piece, with the words, kept pulling me in with their reach. Having wasted over forty years of my life ignoring my Lord and Savior, I know exactly what this 'reaching' by Him feels like for when I finally noticed it I clearly understood what it was.

With all this blathering of mine I can't even begin to explain how strongly I connected to this piece.
05/13/11
What a beautiful love letter from Jesus.
05/16/11
Short and pointed straight to the heart. "Oh Love that will not let me go."
05/16/11
Short, but all was said that needed to be said. So beautiful. The 5th and 6th paragraphs are simply priceless.
05/20/11
Congratulations on placing 9th in your level!
05/21/11
Yep, that's how God thinks of us. I'm so glad he does. His love is overwhelming.

Congrats on placing! :)