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Tears came to my eyes as I read how this dog is rescued. The story flows well. To my mind though the acrostic interrupted the flow and seemed unnecessary. It has good “stuff” in it but the story itself already showed the good stuff. Other than that this makes a great devotional.
04/26/11
I enjoyed your emotional packed story of the stray fellow rescued - a modern parable.
Thanks for your interesting story.
You have a wonderful message in your well written story.
05/03/11
A moving, meaningful message! Well done.