The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so sweet. I liked how the grandmother outsmarted the guys. It's sad that people can let something so silly keep them apart. Nice storytelling.
Oh I like this. Clever grandma indeed. Your piece, as it unfolded,like the yellowed papers, ushered me into its contents and left me wanting more of the sweet stories. Speaks to the heart as often we let differences or circumstances divide us or keep us from growing in the Lord. Nicely done!!
05/04/11
Heartwarming tale that pulled me in and kept my interest! This story may have or not been fiction but the sad truth of what jealousy can do is shown well here...as well as how repenting and forgivness can restore! Enjoyed the read!