The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Ahhh... such a comforting story! I like the little non-verbal descriptions "crinkled nose" "raised eyebrow" - although I don't you needed to explain them. The reader would have been able to interpret them.
Great story!
02/03/11
Heart touching story. I like it. Two people getting to know each other better, dealing with the same loss. Thank you.
02/03/11
Great details in this piece. Congratulations on your EC!
02/03/11
This is such a sweet tender story. Congratulations on your EC.
COngratulations, Linda on your EC. Loved the story and fitting of the title.