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Very emotional piece and the writing was brilliant. Loved this. It is so hard to imagine what it would be like to be alone after living with someone for a longtime. Great insight. Great job!!
12/09/10
So very vivid, I was right there. Not sure I would be strong enough to sit and stare at the billboard. Very well done.
12/10/10
Unique concept. I love the voice of your MC. Powerfully done.
Excellent writing. You took me to the heart of the MC. without being maudlin. It felt authentic.
12/14/10
Very creative. It was classic "show" not "tell" in revelaing so much about her reactions to the break-up. Well done.
12/14/10
You did a remarkable job of capturing your mc's pain but also her determination in moving forward. I enjoyed your mc's voice and personality. Well done.
12/14/10
Your writing in this piece is stunning. So many emotions and very vivid images, all meticulously crafted.
12/15/10
Very good imagery! You have captured the emotions and the scenes very well. As I read through your story, I was able to feel and picture everything as though I was there with the MC. Excellent piece.
I really enjoyed seeing how the MC went from despair to hope. It's a refreshing message of hope for all who have had their heart broken one way or another. You did a good job on this.