The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/10
What a delightful story! Raymond sounds a lot like my own quiet husband. I really liked how your story brought out the truth and beauty of those that think deeply, but speak rarely. This is excellent writing!
So, how did Margaret respond? I would like to hear more!
09/12/10
Well drawn characters. I was anticipating a tragic ending with Raymond suffering a heart attack and Margaret finding his note too late! Glad that your version had a much more positive ending.
Aahh this was so romantic. I wonder if I printed several copies and left them on my husband's computer, his car seat, the bathroom if he'd take the hint. I might need to wait another 29 years:) this is a lovely read and I so enjoyed it.
09/16/10
Wonderful! Well written. I enjoyed this very much. I'm married to the wonderful Raymond, by the way. Congratulations!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall as well as receiving an EC!