The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job making me feel the repulsion of myself and others toward this particular sin. It's so easy to forget to: hate the sin, love the person. I share your heart and in fact, wrote about it also, in Broken By Despair. This is an awesome eye opener to reach out to ALL who verbally or silently ask for help, and if such a man ventured into a church service, then he's definitely asking for help. Enjoyed your ending, made me smile! However, your right...although this is fictional, probably has and or will happen.
I really enjoyed this. It gave me so much to think about. It made me sad that even the minister wasn't wise enough to say something to snap the congregation into " Jesus thinking" into acting like Jesus would Wang us to behave. I guess the old phrase what would Jesus do is what I'm trying to say. This was amazing writing and very thought provoking. I'm glad you submitted it!
I really enjoyed this. It gave me so much to think about. It made me sad that even the minister wasn't wise enough to say something to snap the congregation into " Jesus thinking" into acting like Jesus would Wang us to behave. I guess the old phrase what would Jesus do is what I'm trying to say. This was amazing writing and very thought provoking. I'm glad yousubmitted it in time!
09/11/10
I liked this very much and thought it wisely exposed some ugly truths about human tendencies to judge.

I almost wish you could have used this one for the current theme, 'the inner person' because that would have been perfect!
Very good and true. We have an interesting fellow coming to our church at the moment and it is interesting to see everyone's attitudes. My boyfriend has befriended him and we are really praying for him - you can too, his name is Stuart