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This is a chilling tale of what can happen when things are kept bottled up. How wonderful to have Jesus who is ready to carry or heavy burdens.
I believe there are many that need to hear the message of John 20 right now as this is the "2nd" great story, using this scripture. It's in beginners and is the second Just Breathe entry. I don't believe it is coincidence as there are so many of us going through truly hard ordeals right now, so AMEN! You did a good job of portraying a desperate soul seeking relief, with God our Father, intervening with His precious love and gift of breath.