The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet poem! Good job with this one!
Simply adorable. "Mouse caught in a trap," that put me there.
05/13/10
This put a smile on my face...The rhythm & rhyme, I thought worked well. Its a wise mature woman who can admit her husband is right:)))
05/14/10
I like this very much. My husband also critiques for me, and I know I can trust him to tell the truth, even with a glare or two from me. lol
So sweet! A wonderful tribute to your kind critiquing husband, AND to you - a humble teachable wife. Precious poem! (I also love the title.)