The Official Writing Challenge
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This is brilliant. The fast pace of the story left me breathless.
Whew! I got down as far as Cripple Creek and gave up. I was so confused about who was who, and all the new people popping up that I quit reading. I'll come back and read the rest when I get my head straightened out. Honest Injun! Just a matter of bad timing ...needed something soothing after a stressful day. Later....ok? (*.*)
Funny and fun! (And if that Honda were green, you'd further prove my theory that they are very bad luck. HeHe! Long story. . .)

Anyway, I like the processing going on here in the writer's mind. I almost didn't want to leave Sam and the grass-hoppery preacher though. ;)
I just realized something . . . a preacher with orange, spikey hair???!! Whoa! He must be a youth pastor. . . HeHe! ;)
Sharon, I'm going to feature this VERY clever story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of May 30. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!