The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/10
I could see the WOW written on their faces. Thanks for taking me back to that place.
03/19/10
Well written and entertaining. At first, I thought it was a modern day story as I didn't know what "Begonas" were. As I kept reading, I was hoping Adam and Jared were going to receive their salvation and when I realized this was about Noah, my heart sank and then really sank at their scoffing and waving goodbye. Well done!
03/25/10
Interesting, but...I don't recall reading where Noah had any help other than his sons. Keep writing.