The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/10
I love the contrasts of the spiteful church women and the tatooed girl. I really like the ending. Good story with a great message.
Very good message. It's sad how sometimes the church ladies can be some of the scariest members? A very good reminder for me to not prejudge. Thank you.
02/24/10
SO heart-breakingly true to life. Wonderful writing and message.
02/24/10
Whoa! A sermon and you never preached a word. Well done even if the honesty of it made me squirm a little.
02/24/10
Ouch! Hypocrites --with a capital "H".... I don't think I'd care to worship with them, or for that matter, to worship their god. Very creative story and a great message!
02/25/10
Yay Debbie! Congrats on your EC!
02/25/10
Very strong message - loud and clear! Great writing, and congrats on your well-deserved placing.
02/25/10
Great profile of how so many of God's people are so keen to be witnesses - for the prosecution instead of for salvation. The four words your MC left may have only gone to the ladies' heads, but I hope they went to their hearts as well.