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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: Grrr! (01/28/10)
New email

Sender: [email protected]

Date: 07/25/08
Time: 0830

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Bcc: save to file: [email protected]

Subject: subject outline


Dear Sir,

I’m writing in regard to my subject that you will be teaching next college semester. I understand that the outline of my subject, code 2190 - ‘Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’, should be on my student page of your Nice College website.

Unfortunately, there seems to be no available information on 'subject 2190' according to my subject information page.

Please confirm the location of my course details.

Yours truly,

Confused Student



Reply email

Sender: [email protected]

Date: 07/29/08
Time: 1432

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Subject: re: subject outline


Dear Confused,

I think you will find you are looking in the wrong place. You need to go to your student page and use the subject information link.

You will find the subject,'Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’- code 2190, is there. I just checked our Nice College data base and I see it clearly.

Yours truly,

I M Smarter



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Sender: [email protected]

Date: 07/30/08
Time: 1545

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Bcc: save to file: [email protected]

Subject: re: re: subject outline


Dear I M Smarter,

As stated in my original email the subject ‘Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’ - code 2190, is not on my student page of your Nice College website.

There is a ‘Not Available’ notice on my Nice College student page for the subject, 'Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’- code 2190.

Please direct me to another possible location elsewhere on your Nice College website.

Yours truly,

Confused Student



Reply email

Sender: [email protected]

Date: 08/03/08
Time: 0915

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Bcc:

Subject: re: re: re subject outline


Dear Confused,

I’m not sure if I understand your question. Please repeat the information you require.

Please note:
My Nice College contact telephone number is in the process of being changed. Please email all inquiries to [email protected]

Yours truly,

I M Smarter



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Sender: [email protected]

Date: 08/04/08
Time: 1800

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Bcc: save to file: [email protected]

Subject: re: re: re: re: subject outline


Dear I M Smarter,

As stated in my original email, subject, Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’- code 2190, is not on my student page of your Nice College website.

There is a ‘Not Available’ notice on my Nice College student page.

Please direct me to another possible location elsewhere on your Nice College website.

Yours truly,

Confused Student



Reply email

Sender: [email protected]

Date: 08/07/08
Time: 0915

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Bcc:

Subject: re: re: re: re: re: subject outline


Dear Confused,

Please have you subject outline read before your first class tomorrow. Please email me if you have any questions in regard to your subject ‘Teach me all I’m supposed to know’ - code 2190.

Yours truly,

I M Smarter



Reply email

Sender: [email protected]

Date: 08/08/08
Time: 0945

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Bcc: save to file: [email protected]

Subject: re: re: re: re: re: re: subject outline


Dear I M Smarter,

Thank you for your reply email. I was sent the information I requested by my subject coordinator, R U Calm, two days ago. Her reply is attached to this email.

I’ll be attending the first ‘Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’ class tomorrow morning.

Yours truly,

Confused Student


Attachment:

Sender: [email protected]

Date: 08/06/08
Time: 0931

To: [email protected]

Cc: [email protected]

Subject: your subject outline inquiry


Dear Confused,

Our apologies for the lack of communication to our students via our Nice College email system. It appears we had a ‘bug’ in the system and it has now been rectified.

Attached is the new version of the subject outline for ‘Teach me all I’m Suppose to Know’ - code 2190.

‘Teach me all I’m supposed to know’, which was originally written I. M. Smarter, has been recreated by the new teacher for the subject ‘Teach me all I’m Supposed to Know’, Bea Wiser.

Yours truly,

R U Calm
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Member Comments
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Date
Lisha Hunnicutt
02/06/10
Very creative! I think a lot of us can relate to this also, but for me it's usually a run-around throuh an automated phone system and I just want to scream, "Can I talk to a REAL person here?!?"
Lyn Churchyard
02/09/10
Oh my, I hope this isn't what happened to you recently. Most definitely a 'grrr' moment.

Maybe you should change your name to Crystal Ball, then you won't have any problems in the future :-)
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
02/09/10
You wrote a very amusing rendition of a super grr moment. I found myself giggling. I even started getting confused. I did notice you used you once instead of your, but other than that tiny mistake, it was delightful. I pasted the line below.


Please have you subject outline read before your first class tomorrow.
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Mona Purvis
02/09/10
Someone has been reading my emails?! Just a hoot! It is the little Grrr monemts like this that we all endure. Great take on the topic.

Mona
Carol Slider 
02/09/10
Oh, the joys of electronic communication! So efficient when the system works well... so annoying when it doesn't! Good job.
Loren T. Lowery
02/09/10
Hello, wasn't this new technology age suppose to make our lives less stressful. This is almost too real for what is and can be happening in our world today. Well presented and yes, all to believable.
Carol Penhorwood 
02/10/10
This is a perfect example of why I love our new technology so very much. Great job.
Amanda Brogan
02/11/10
Extremely creative and funny! I enjoyed the pretend e-mails and interesting names. :) Bea Wiser would certainly be a better teacher than I M Smarter. Wisdom beats smarts any time. ;)