The Official Writing Challenge
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Anger tears up relationships like nothing else. I welcomed this entry on anger and you did a good job showing its powerful destructive nature. For the entry, I would have liked to know names of the characters, age range and maybe a little more about them.
The "OW" seemed to be out of place for the hurt. Not a quick injury, but one well-known and nursed over time. I somehow felt a deeper hurting than "OW" expresses.
Strong writing and interesting story.

Beautifully written and a wonderful turn at the end.
Isn't funny how the Word seems to show us things we don't WANT to see, but surely NEED to see? The answer to anger is well described in this entry.
Proverbs 15:1 is one of my life verses. It is amazing what a difference it makes. Great illustration of this verse.