The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Anger tears up relationships like nothing else. I welcomed this entry on anger and you did a good job showing its powerful destructive nature. For the entry, I would have liked to know names of the characters, age range and maybe a little more about them.
The "OW" seemed to be out of place for the hurt. Not a quick injury, but one well-known and nursed over time. I somehow felt a deeper hurting than "OW" expresses.
Strong writing and interesting story.

mona
01/16/10
Beautifully written and a wonderful turn at the end.
01/17/10
Isn't funny how the Word seems to show us things we don't WANT to see, but surely NEED to see? The answer to anger is well described in this entry.
01/18/10
Proverbs 15:1 is one of my life verses. It is amazing what a difference it makes. Great illustration of this verse.