The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/10
Cute story....had me going trying to figure out who was doing the "talking".
01/16/10
Cute! I was thinking ventriloquist, but the bit with the kids was adorable.
A few great surprises in there. I had a feeling it was "Red", but couldn't be sure until the end.

Great job!
01/18/10
Loved it! Funny, interesting, great plot. Love the ending. (Took me back to my childhood...my aunt and uncle had a chicken farm. My cousins and I had a job on chicken-killing day...catch the chickens after their heads had been chopped off and take them to the boiling pot. Couldn't eat chicken for years.)
01/21/10
Congratulations on placing in your level! Great job!