The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story....had me going trying to figure out who was doing the "talking".
Cute! I was thinking ventriloquist, but the bit with the kids was adorable.
A few great surprises in there. I had a feeling it was "Red", but couldn't be sure until the end.

Great job!
Loved it! Funny, interesting, great plot. Love the ending. (Took me back to my aunt and uncle had a chicken farm. My cousins and I had a job on chicken-killing day...catch the chickens after their heads had been chopped off and take them to the boiling pot. Couldn't eat chicken for years.)
Congratulations on placing in your level! Great job!