The Official Writing Challenge
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Some nice phrasings here. My fave: "stuffing our bodies into my blue bug as if it were a bikini." A nice tribute to dad. Some tightening will make this a truly great read. It's just a bit "would-y".
10/21/09
I enjoyed reading this. The car my parents got me to drive in high school was also a stick shift. I can remember the frustration of trying to learn to drive it. Yet, I came to love the thrill of driving a stick shift.