The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Wow...your memories are so vivid and well written here. I felt the horror.
08/27/09
This took me back a year ago. My wife had to have a C-section...and you described the setting quite well. Good Job!
09/01/09
Very effective communication of the MC's emotions. the story kept my attention from start to finish.