The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/09
Very cute! Love the bits of humor - and bits of fact - thrown in.

This read a little bit stilted in some places, but overall very enjoyable to read.
09/03/09
Thanks, Lisa, for the commentary on the progress of a baby from conception to a year. Whoa! tho'. You don't want to bump into the next weeks' challenge topic, "childhood." You stopped at just the right time...Since I have never birthed a child myself, and was never around a sibling when their babies were going through the creation process you described, I feel "educated" by your detailed description of the journey of the baby...Enjoyable!...Blessings...Helen
09/04/09
Very fun entry! This is great education for those who don't know child development. You could definitely expand it past the 750 words for additional publication. :)