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The emotions are so vividly expressed, I'm still in tears. Very heart-breaking. Love the last paragraph.
04/25/09
Well told, and heart wrenching! In this sense, looking forward to the end is a great thought.
04/27/09
This is a touching, heartfelt piece. Hope it will touch those who need to be comforted.
04/28/09
How beautiful and touching. This should be printed and distributed to grieving parents.
04/29/09
I cannot help but be reminded of those who are experiencing that same pain, only without the assurance of being reunited with them in heaven, and without The Comforter to gently carry them through their grief here on earth.

Very well written.