The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/09
I enjoyed this piece and liked the creative way you described the surroundings.
02/14/09
Very vivid descriptions. I felt like I was right there.
02/14/09
So many good descriptions, I totally wrapped my mind around this story...from the manholes of New York City to the personified blow holes. I was able to put myself smack dab in the middle of the adventure and I had a very good time, even at 4:00 in the morning!
Congratulations!!! Your descriptions definitely make your entry unique!!
02/25/09
Great descriptive writing, and I love the imaginative names you give the geysers and so clothe them with their own personalities! Congratulations on a well-deserved EC.