The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
Double Wow. A wonderful narration. I felt I was there with you - cause many years ago I was doing the same in a powder blue 67' Mustang.
Thanks for the memory.
07/26/05
Well done work that speaks volumes about the personality of youthful masculinity! Favorite line: "If I can just speed up a bit I am certain the wind will cool the engine down - thus I test (not for the first time) my belief in my personal immortality and the belief that my car has the heart of Herbie."

07/27/05
This was a lot of fun to read. Great title too.
07/27/05
This was really wonderful, I enjoyed reading every bit of your adventurous car trip. I liked the title too. God bless ya, littlelight
07/27/05
Very creative! A fun read.
Pat Guy  
07/28/05
I'm glad I don't have any boys left at home! This might have given them ideas! Loved the ride!
07/28/05
Wonderful! Thank you for sharing!
07/28/05
Loved it! Especially your translation of the familiar verse. :)
07/28/05
Wonderful detail! I too felt like I was the driver taking that trip!
07/29/05
Fantastic. What a ride! I enjoyed every minute. Thanks for taking us along.
07/30/05
quite the trip! Thank goodness for prayers from worried parents!
07/31/05
Oh, I so much enjoyed this! I was attracted by the interesting title. Good lesson at the end! Thank you.