The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/08
Masterfully crafted, and a story rich with vivid descriptions and a poignant message. This moved me.
You had me hangin' on to the end.
What a celebration in heaven and on earth to know his life is now God's.
Excellent story! I was completely engaged.
12/16/08
Great voice for this story, and the story is told very well. I'm not sure an execution would actually be scheduled for Christmas day, but I could be wrong. Besides, it's fiction! Good job!
12/17/08
Great imagery and descriptions, and kept my attention throughout.