The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/07
This was really good. It flowed well.

I would have maybe kept the form a bit more consistent by always starting with the "You are..." line, but that's a matter of opinion.

I loved all the analogies you used.
"You are a whisper of truth,
interrupting the deafening babble of fools." How true!
09/28/07
Congratulations, Katherine. Your entry has placed 15th in Level 3. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall are available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.
10/06/07
Our first temptation when we are trying to find calm is to turn to the strength within ourselves or look to outside means. However, you have beautifully pointed out the HE is the one true place where we can find it. Great job!