The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
Very nice! Great meter, and I love the message! Your stanzas not all having the same number of lines threw me some until I realized the meter didn't really change. Other than that, this was fantastic. :)
08/10/07
Beautifully done! Such a great message is such a delightful rhythmic way. Really liked this one. Kudos!
"Be angry, but do not sin." You have presented a wonderful lesson with your rhythmic poem.
08/15/07
I really liked reading this. It made me smile, but it was also convicting. Good job!