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07/19/07
You had me smiling all the way through this! I like the MC, especially how he made it through the whole trip, etc. The last line was priceless. Very cute and fun. ^_^
07/19/07
Cute article and well done. For being twelve, that is. LOL :)
07/20/07
Wonderful! This is a well written, positive story! Made me happy while reading it. I really felt for the main character and that last line is a super way to end the story.
07/24/07
It fits "happy" and "confident" too. It seems like all of us have something that makes us feel "twelve" or makes us feel like others think we are "twelve." I know I can relate!

I, too, love the humor of the closing line!