The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/07
This is a very enjoyable piece. It is obvious you love horses and everyone in the neighborhood considered Miss Mandy very special. You very nicely described a very happy and pleasant experience with an animal you obviously cherish.
So good to know I'm not the only person who's thrown a birthday party for a horse! Loved the descriptions. One teensy thing I have to point out: it's "bridle" not "bridal."
07/23/07
It took me a while to catch on — could be me! Another little detail, it should be corral not coral. Sweet story.