The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
A neat story, and so true! How many times the road is unclear, but trusting in God, He shows that He really does have a plan.

One tip - consider putting double returns in between paragraphs to help separate thoughts. Also keep a lookout for grammar and problem words such as "there" vs. "their" and "loose" vs. "lose."

Great entry!
A positive take on faith here. God will be there when we need him. Very encouraging.
06/02/07
Nice account of living by faith in God! I liked the part where the characters said, "This is scary...Scary enough to be God." I would suggest that you separate your story into paragraphs for easier reading, and there were a cuople spelling errors proofreading should catch. You had a good message of God's faithful provision! Thanks for sharing it! :)