The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/07
I loved it.
The descriptions were so vivid! A delight to read.
This is superb! I love your colorful descriptions and I held my breath all the way through, wondering if this were a person or an animal who was running. You kept me in suspense and I enjoyed it.
06/05/07
You definitely have a way with detail and descriptions. I was so afraid for your MC. Very imaginative!!