The Official Writing Challenge
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Great rhyme and rhythm, and beautiful words. Great work.
Thank you for reminding us of how much Christ loves us. Isn't His love amazing?
One thought for critique: I suggest that you avoid cliche rhymes such as love/above...
Keep up the good work!
Lovely! It is so encouraging and flows well. Good read.
05/25/07
YES! HIS LOVE! Great writing!
05/26/07
Awesome and powerful message here.
05/29/07
Just lovely - your rhythm AND message are spot on. I truly was blessed by this!
05/30/07
Meaningful concept and good meter. Nice job!
05/30/07
s pristine verse proper to say? the poem is like a lily, soft and beautiful. Well done, my friend.