The Official Writing Challenge
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This was beautiful, but quite sad, a lot of emotions came through in this piece. Great work!
Neat, creative poem. That last stanza is especially powerful.
It took me awhile, but I finally got the message here. Good job, I'm just a little slow today.
05/25/07
Good message.
05/27/07
I like the rhythm, and the descriptive phrases and colours you use to bring the various Bible stories alive.
05/30/07
Sue, this is anointed! Nothing can dim His love! WOW!
05/30/07
Is pristine verse proper to say? the poem is like a lily, soft and beautiful. Well done, my friend.
05/30/07
Scratch above comment - thought I was doing a different poem.

This is powerful verse - hammering home the meaning. Wonderful structure of the poem.
05/30/07
Love the imagery and the strong words you use. This was masterfully crafted, Sue.
05/30/07
Okay Sue! You really pushed yourself here! Absolutely beautiful! The colors, the emotions, and the perfect title and just everything in this piece! I LOVE it. ^_^ Awesome job!
Wow! You covered a lot of ground in this thought-provoking poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
05/30/07
Very visual. Good job. God bless.
I saw the abuse coming but not the Bible stories... good ending. Angel