The Official Writing Challenge
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This was beautiful, but quite sad, a lot of emotions came through in this piece. Great work!
Neat, creative poem. That last stanza is especially powerful.
It took me awhile, but I finally got the message here. Good job, I'm just a little slow today.
Good message.
I like the rhythm, and the descriptive phrases and colours you use to bring the various Bible stories alive.
Sue, this is anointed! Nothing can dim His love! WOW!
Is pristine verse proper to say? the poem is like a lily, soft and beautiful. Well done, my friend.
Scratch above comment - thought I was doing a different poem.

This is powerful verse - hammering home the meaning. Wonderful structure of the poem.
Love the imagery and the strong words you use. This was masterfully crafted, Sue.
Okay Sue! You really pushed yourself here! Absolutely beautiful! The colors, the emotions, and the perfect title and just everything in this piece! I LOVE it. ^_^ Awesome job!
Wow! You covered a lot of ground in this thought-provoking poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Very visual. Good job. God bless.
I saw the abuse coming but not the Bible stories... good ending. Angel