The Official Writing Challenge
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12/18/06
The first part of this story is moody and very touching. In the second part, he becomes a "sung" hero...

A few verb tense inconsistencies to clear up.

I like World War II stories, and this is a fine example.
12/19/06
I love how the hero sees all of HIS heroes in the crowd. Very moving ending - Great job.