The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/15
I loved this story. Your characters became so real and I could image the mother walking down the isle with her sons. What an amazing message about marriage. You did a great job. I wish you all the best with this.

God bless. :)
11/02/15
Well done with the topic "mix." I enjoyed the story and, felt it was well written.
11/04/15
I love the song, "Broken Together" and this story touched my heart as I am in a similar situation. You have a lovely way of storytelling
11/04/15
I like the interchange between Kaelyn and her mother, and Kaelyn's fears for the mother's future with her dad. The mother's faith seems strong enough to set the daughter's anxiety at rest as she accepts what her parents are about to do. The mixing of the two colours of the koolaid adds a nice touch to the story.