The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/12
Excellent job! I loved this poem, and its beautiful message. Thanks you!

God Bless~
This is quite lovely and touched my heart. I think you had a tiny typo planed instead of planned. The rhythm and rhymes were nice.
Thank you for a beautiful poem. It speaks volumes. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks and God bless.