The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for your story. I enjoyed this very much. Isn't it funny how encouraging words can life ones spirit and give them peace. Keep writing.
04/22/10
Absolutely loved your opening! The story develops well but I found myself curious as to how old Amanda was. Again, I love that she finds herself in the middle of an adventure story as she reads Acts. Keep up the good work.
Adult illiteracy is a very real topic. You did a good job expressing how one can grow if one reads.
Mmmmmm, I could smell the bread!
Very absorbing story about how much Amanda's world changed because of another kind soul, touching and encouraging her to read. Especially like where it led her and the self confidence she grew in.