The Official Writing Challenge
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AMEN! Start your day with Gods Holy Word and Satan doesn't stand a chance. His grace is sufficient for all. Keep writing.
04/22/10
I really liked this especially the part about you being the reader and He the breather. However, "I'll be drinking in His grace and being set free" seemed awkward to me. I think it's the be and being in the same sentence. Perhaps '...His grace as He sets me free' would work. Overall good message and I thank you for inviting me to join you.
Your words are very powerful and beautiful. There's a few spots that have a little problem flowing and meter, but I also struggle with rhythm. but your thoughts and words make up for the tiny bumps. Keep writing and never lose that passion.
Thank you so much for this encouragement to continue doing what I find enriching and sustaining.