The Official Writing Challenge
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AMEN! Start your day with Gods Holy Word and Satan doesn't stand a chance. His grace is sufficient for all. Keep writing.
04/22/10
I really liked this especially the part about you being the reader and He the breather. However, "I'll be drinking in His grace and being set free" seemed awkward to me. I think it's the be and being in the same sentence. Perhaps '...His grace as He sets me free' would work. Overall good message and I thank you for inviting me to join you.
Your words are very powerful and beautiful. There's a few spots that have a little problem flowing and meter, but I also struggle with rhythm. but your thoughts and words make up for the tiny bumps. Keep writing and never lose that passion.
04/27/10
Thank you so much for this encouragement to continue doing what I find enriching and sustaining.