The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
I liked how you called God your "knight in shining armor". You made me feel your love for him.
05/27/06
A modern Psalm! Great! I think the second verse needs an extra question mark and speech marks (or italics if it's thoughts - do that with at the beginning and at the end). Other than that, I enjoyed it a lot.
05/31/06
Indeed a modern psalm! If writing like this is like strumming on the strings of a guitar, you are strumming on our heart strings! Keep writing!
05/31/06
Felt the love and joy! Great job!