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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Joy (05/18/06)

TITLE: My knight in shining armour
By Genstacia Bull
05/25/06


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I will praise you no matter what it cost
When I am weary and would rather sob.
I will think on your goodness
Instead of complain and I will thank you for the good times.

What good times a dark thought lingered my mind
Have you looked at yourself lately?
You have been foolish; waiting for Godís timing
Ha! You are the laughing stock of all your friends.

I choose to think on what is true and lovely
Casting down imaginations that pull me down.
God you have been truly faithful
I have the privilege to be called your child.

I can stroll along the park on a spring day
In awe of how the clouds float in the bright blue sky
And feel the crisp breeze blow against my face.
And hear the birds chirping sounds.

Yes I will sing and give you praise
You are my friend and my hero.
You are my knight in shining armour
So I will rejoice in you.


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Crystal Coyne05/26/06
I liked how you called God your "knight in shining armor". You made me feel your love for him.
Helen Paynter05/27/06
A modern Psalm! Great! I think the second verse needs an extra question mark and speech marks (or italics if it's thoughts - do that with at the beginning and at the end). Other than that, I enjoyed it a lot.
Anthony David05/31/06
Indeed a modern psalm! If writing like this is like strumming on the strings of a guitar, you are strumming on our heart strings! Keep writing!
Rita Garcia05/31/06
Felt the love and joy! Great job!