The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/06
Well, I hafta say, this started out as a realistic story. But, what happened? The middle part troubled me (all of a sudden she is attracted to a stranger?). And, the ending just made me laugh, it was so UNbelievable. Was that what you meant to do? Or, am I missing a big chunk of something I don't see? Good writing, otherwise.