The Official Writing Challenge
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This is cute and realistic. There were a few run-on sentences and small mistakes, but overall, this is a very good entry.
Good stuff! Really cute dialog, good flow. Realistic enough to take me back to many late pillow-talks with my own sis, over 45 years ago. Thanks for this!
05/09/06
Cute Story!

There was one sentence I couldn't understand.
"Trena was wise beyond her years, whereas Tasha was a social butterfly both were intelligent but Trena was just that bit intuitive and her sister trusted in that."

Sweet sisterhood!