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Many youthful writers may be attracted to this creative area of writing because of the many games and movies that need script writers with imagination directed in this way.
12/09/16
This is a clever story, reading very much like an episode of 'Star Trek.'

I'd have liked more of the relationship between the human who loved Jayde and Jayde herself--that would have provided more connection with your readers, who are, after all, human. Since Jayde is obviously sentient, knowing more of her thoughts and feelings during the crisis time would have made for a compelling read and created a more rounded character.
Congratulations, my beloved, on your first EC.
I am so excited for and proud of you!
12/15/16
Congratulations, Art, on placing 1st place in the Intermediate category and 8th place overall. I'm glad to see you're moving up to the Advanced category and hope to see many more EC awards in your future!

I must confess I don't read much Science fiction but enjoyed reading this story.

Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
12/16/16
Art, Congratulation on your 1st place finish in the Intermediate division and 8th place overall.

This was a creative approach to the easy as pie category. You did a great job of enlightening us to the Science Fiction genre.

I would have liked to understand more about what captivated the crew member toward the women. Was it her physical beauty or was it how she had been programmed.

Look forward to reading more of your work.
02/12/17
Congratulations on your level win and EC placing with this interesting sci fi entry.