The Official Writing Challenge
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What an honor to be the first to comment on your exceptional paeon of glory to God. I just soaked in this excellent piece. I am so happy to be a member of Faithwriters if for no other reason than to read these wonderful stories.

Thank for breaking my heart and putting it back together again . . .
09/15/13
Wow- So powerful and so touching. I loved, loved, loved your last line: I am not the expert on my life then, merely the beneficiary of the expertise of Christ.

I wish I had thought of it first! Seriously, so good. And, that last line was from within...excellent!

GOD Bless~
This is an interesting piece. Your subtle sense of humor had me smiling and nodding. I did notice you repeated some words or ideas like it felt and expert. I liked the ending and though you contradicted yourself instead of coming full circle, it worked. It made me feel like you were sharing the epiphany with the reader. You took me on a journey while delivering a powerful message. Good job.
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