The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/12
I enjoyed this clever story with truths and meaning. Thank you. God bless~
07/24/12
You did a really good job here but I would have chosen one or the other to write about. I loved the way you started your entry with your mom. You could have done the whole story about her or you could have done the whole thing about Brother Lawrence. It was like you had two really great ideas and couldn't decide. You did a nice job though. Nice work!
I really enjoyed this message. It has many good points to it. I liked how God is with us during even the most menial tasks. We also all need to work together and it doesn't matter whether we are at the top, supervising, or at the bottom scrubbing pans. You tackled the topic in a fresh and informative way.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level two!